Journey of Life
From where we came,where will go,
simple,but yet difficult.
mother's womb,we can say,
But 'the life' where'd you get?
Look up that banyan tree
from where it came do you know?
The seed, for sure you might say
then break the seed and show me.
If you search for it heartlily
will get the answer for surely.
Energy,call scientifically,
Dear God ,we say fondly.
Yes, the supreme energy God,
from there we came,there we go.
Life a journey to , from God;
yes, of course, from to energy.
Written for Jingles poetry potluck
From where we came,where will go,
simple,but yet difficult.
mother's womb,we can say,
But 'the life' where'd you get?
Look up that banyan tree
from where it came do you know?
The seed, for sure you might say
then break the seed and show me.
If you search for it heartlily
will get the answer for surely.
Energy,call scientifically,
Dear God ,we say fondly.
Yes, the supreme energy God,
from there we came,there we go.
Life a journey to , from God;
yes, of course, from to energy.
Written for Jingles poetry potluck
12 comments:
You write so beautifully Rashmi and with such thought, just wonderful!
very beautiful...ahhh
amazing job!
this is so true. it all starts and ends with God. what a lovely piece!
Rashmi,
very beautiful and attractive poem....nice description of life..
Best wishes.
Hemant
http://childrensheaven.blogspot.com
Great, thought-provoking. I love the way you connect science and religion.
simply brilliant!
thanks for sharing!
These are the questions..
Oddly written, in a good way, to me.
this is gonna have me pondering all night again.Thank you
Yes,that interesting banyan tree does make me also think of life and eternity. Lovely ahd thoughtful poem.
Strummed Words
the appropriate questions which ive asked myself a million times.
wonderful poem :)
great topic. life is tough and ans questions on life is tougher :(
You have written so bautifully.. I liked it so much... thanks
जय दुर्गा जी, जय काली माँ
Jai Durga Ji, Jai Kali Ma
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You nailed it with this one, it's perfect!
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