10/06/2010

Poem20. Journey of Life

Journey of Life



From where we came,where will go,
 simple,but yet difficult.
 mother's womb,we can say,
But 'the life' where'd you get?


Look up that banyan tree
 from where  it came do you know?
The seed, for sure you might say
then break the seed and show me.

If you search for it heartlily
 will  get the answer for surely.
Energy,call scientifically,
Dear God ,we say fondly.

Yes, the supreme energy God,
from there we came,there we go.
Life a journey to , from God;
yes, of course, from  to energy.

Written for Jingles poetry potluck

12 comments:

Deborah said...

You write so beautifully Rashmi and with such thought, just wonderful!

Nells said...

very beautiful...ahhh

Jingle said...

amazing job!

Bing (PinkLady) said...

this is so true. it all starts and ends with God. what a lovely piece!

हेमंत कुमार ♠ Hemant Kumar said...

Rashmi,
very beautiful and attractive poem....nice description of life..
Best wishes.
Hemant
http://childrensheaven.blogspot.com

Teresa said...

Great, thought-provoking. I love the way you connect science and religion.

Jingle said...

simply brilliant!
thanks for sharing!

woih said...

These are the questions..
Oddly written, in a good way, to me.
this is gonna have me pondering all night again.Thank you

Strummed Words said...

Yes,that interesting banyan tree does make me also think of life and eternity. Lovely ahd thoughtful poem.

Strummed Words

Harshika said...

the appropriate questions which ive asked myself a million times.

wonderful poem :)

great topic. life is tough and ans questions on life is tougher :(

Shashi said...

You have written so bautifully.. I liked it so much... thanks

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The Unknowngnome said...

You nailed it with this one, it's perfect!