12/09/2010

Poem 38. A Friend I Have

A Friend I Have


Who stands with you all times
whom  with you, share  feelings
whose mere sight calms you down
who will say ' will be ok'
with a nod , a pat,or a sound,
with love which you can feel
characteristics for a  friend
we look for ,but seldom get.

A friend such, I do have
who is near me and never fails.
When feel sad, I go there
she swings,touches for a pat.
When am happy then she sways
a breeze of love on my face.
She is there for me all day
ready to share my dear life.

Beautiful she stands out there
playing with lots of birds,
 morning early she wakes up
fresh with dew when I see.
 she sleeps with hands closed
tired after a days work.
Goose berry tree,my friend true,
dear to me and near always.

Entering  for Jingle's Poetry potluck

12 comments:

Deborah said...

So lovely, a wonderful poem.

Anonymous said...

Very nice.

Kodjo Deynoo said...

whose mere sight calms you down...this says a lot, a lovely poem

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I so love this - friendship with a tree. Beautiful! The last stanza is especially wonderful.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

sweet portrayal of your friend.
well done.

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Rashmi,

A beautiful appreciation of our connection with nature.
I really loved this poem for its real simplicity and bond of friendship.

Best wishes, Eileen

Deepika Vasudeva said...

a friend is most precious gift of god.. that we find in this world full of crowd...

Anonymous said...

Super-cute poem

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

amazing

Glad to see you share..

A++

Anonymous said...

lovely poem my friend.. heres mine- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/painted-hallways/

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Anonymous said...

beautiful, one of the most important reasons why we need to take care of the Earth