7/12/2012

Poem80.Sail on a leaf..

Sail on a leaf..

Was swimming all alone
with fierce loneliness
tried to look across
saw just water more.

A leaf came to me
as I was drowning blue.
Tired and half lost
no energy to fight.

Got onto ,without thinking
boats were moving
ships were sailing
but, none was stopping.

Unknown leaf owner
acknowledged, a head shake
handed me with another
one of his rows spare.

Shaking the row in water
tried to learn it safer
no punch laugh or jokes
silent,safe but serious.

Anger tension always abode
but ,sails always secure
has on mind that am there
won't take risks anymore.

Gratefulness or love
what should I have
for looking after me
when no body was there.

7 comments:

Kutamun said...

Thanks for taking me with you on your magical leaf , Artemis !

Brian Miller said...

nice..evocative...all moving but none stopping...and then the no one there for me in the end...

Wayne Pitchko said...

nicely done.....thanks for sharing

Susannah said...

"Was swimming all alone
with fierce loneliness"

...another lovely poem Rashmi.

I thought I would come and say hello as I have been missing from the blogs for a long while. :-)

It was lovely to see you at my blog earlier. - I am glad you are still writing your poems.

Much love to you, I hope all is well. x

Myrna R. said...

I feel like I traveled on a familiar journey of sadness. You writing is lovely.

Thank you for reading my interview at Poets United.

kolembo said...

What a glorious photo! And good poem. lovely.

Green Speck said...

this was a good read ... interesting :-)