10/08/2010

Poem23. If You love


If You Love



Where there is lack of love
you can hear complaints
Where there is full of love
you will have compliments.

If your love is not strong
you start finding wrongs.
if  you does not belong
arguments prolong.

Then starts complaints different
which you can not confront
so think of so many instants
which help your love fragrant.

Love makes life beautiful
Adjustments wont be painful
Complaints wont be hurtful
Life will sure be wonderful.

 For Poet's United's   The Thursday Think Tank - Prompt #18 - Complaints.



14 comments:

Deborah said...

You've managed to write a beautiful poem full of love and still keep to the prompt for 'complaints' ... just wonderful! :o)

Diane T said...

Love makes life beautiful... I love this line! And so honest!

Ellie said...

I love how you did this; The elements of keeping a relationship together~ Well Done~

Mary said...

Lots of truths here.

"If your love is not strong
you start finding wrongs."

Sherry Blue Sky said...

"Love makes life beautiful" - so true.

Jingle said...

true words,

complaints come from the lack of love.
well put.

Carrie Burtt said...

True words of love here Rashmi...beautiful! :-)

हेमंत कुमार ♠ Hemant Kumar said...

Love makes life beautiful
Adjustments wont be painful
Complaints wont be hurtful
Life will sure be wonderful.
Nice post Rashmi--you had well defined love.
best wishes.
Hemant

Harshika said...

lovely :)

senderupwords said...

Love is the only reason to live. Love and Light, Sender

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Rashmi,
A delightful read. Love being the basis for all in life.
Contentment, should keep the complaints away!

A good response to the Poetry Prompt.
Eileen

Short Poems said...

True and cleaver words, nicely done :)
Love your writing!
Take care
Marinela x

Jingle said...

I am working on placing your link to Jingle Poetry blog roll,
I have been occupied by so many stuff, sorry for being late. it will appear within a week.
your poetry rocks.
keep it coming...

write a poem related to 7 sins, link to our potluck today.
Thanks for the support

The Unknowngnome said...

You have expressed 1 Cor 13:4-8 beautifully.

"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails..."