ETERNAL I
When to think, I try,
Can think of only I.
When I think of I,
can't figure it,sigh .
Am I filled with I?
Or is that all is I?
Or is there only I?
Am I self centered,
Or is this selflessness?
Or being not in self?
Can't think of some thing,
where I is not present.
The eternal witness,I -
the God and me in one.
the God and me in one.
Entered for Jingle's poetry potluck.
Thank you very muchJingle for the awards....
You can find other super talented poets by clicking here
I nominate Kavita for the perfect poet award.
8 comments:
awesome post...
you did well.
for general poetry participation awards, no need to nominate, yet, YES, you have the freedom to nominate a poet under your wish.
perfect poem,
lovely awards,
all well deserved and properly displayed.
I have found myself wondering more than a couple of times if the "I" is self-centered or selfless. Is subscribing to one's ego selfless or selfish. I read somewhere that the most complicated and important relationship one can have is with oneself. I couldn't agree more!
http://thebeatofmydrum.com/2010/11/10/the-room/
Well, I am of the opinion that everything begins with "I"!
I is the source, and I is the means!
I really like the topic of your poem... it is so very thought provoking...
And it's so nicely written!!
a selfless poem on shelfishness... great structure and flow of thought. Nice job!
This is thought provoking and I enjoyed reading it, starting from the perfect title.
Very good work..I loved the use of "I"...
Nice title too... :)
You can't escape from you nor I from I.
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