Poem34.The Greatest Wonder.

The Greatest Wonder

Seven wonders of the world ,
the pictures when I saw,
'which is the greatestest wonder?'
the question arised raw.

All these wonders, so special
no doubt ,but then;
everything we see are miracles,
yet taken for granted.

Everyday sun rises east ,
the moon comes only night,
rain gives us water  pure,
the air only in earth.

God created universe
man  created his own,
God gifted powers unique
so he could be like Him.

If all these are miracles,
then what you call the man?
The greatest wonder of the world
who feels himself God.

 Written for Jingle's  POETRY POTLUCK -Magic & Miracles, Wonder & Wizardry

Entered for Jingle's Thursday poet's rally week 33. Click here to read other poets who participate there


kavitha said...

Wow!...rashmi, the flow is excellent....

kaykuala said...

Yes, man is himself a miracle. This is a great piece of poetry!

fiveloaf said...


Jingle said...

God created universe
man created his own,
God gifted powers unique
so he could be like Him.

Those are indeed magical, thanks for the submission to poets rally and potluck.
have fun!

Mary said...

Good sentiment.

marit said...

nice work, happy rally!

David Waters said...

wonderful ;)

Sumit Sarkar said...

the greatest wonder indeed...
great poem :)

Deborah said...

Wonderful Rashmi!

Amity said...

so true, that's right!

TALON said...

Lovely flow and wonderful and true sentiments.

Shashi said...

Dear Rashmi
Its very nice and I enjoyed the softness and spirituality of your words...

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lukepraterswordsalad said...

nicely done, my friend. Like it


Luke @ WordSalad

loveblushfever said...

i like this
play of words
and ideas
of creating