The Greatest Wonder
Seven wonders of the world ,
the pictures when I saw,
'which is the greatestest wonder?'
the question arised raw.
All these wonders, so special
the pictures when I saw,
'which is the greatestest wonder?'
the question arised raw.
All these wonders, so special
no doubt ,but then;
everything we see are miracles,
yet taken for granted.
Everyday sun rises east ,
the moon comes only night,
rain gives us water pure,
the air only in earth.
God created universe
man created his own,
God gifted powers unique
so he could be like Him.
If all these are miracles,
then what you call the man?
The greatest wonder of the world
who feels himself God.
Written for Jingle's POETRY POTLUCK -Magic & Miracles, Wonder & Wizardry
Entered for Jingle's Thursday poet's rally week 33. Click here to read other poets who participate there
everything we see are miracles,
yet taken for granted.
Everyday sun rises east ,
the moon comes only night,
rain gives us water pure,
the air only in earth.
God created universe
man created his own,
God gifted powers unique
so he could be like Him.
If all these are miracles,
then what you call the man?
The greatest wonder of the world
who feels himself God.
Written for Jingle's POETRY POTLUCK -Magic & Miracles, Wonder & Wizardry
Entered for Jingle's Thursday poet's rally week 33. Click here to read other poets who participate there
14 comments:
Wow!...rashmi, the flow is excellent....
Rashmi,
Yes, man is himself a miracle. This is a great piece of poetry!
lovely..
God created universe
man created his own,
God gifted powers unique
so he could be like Him.
...
Those are indeed magical, thanks for the submission to poets rally and potluck.
have fun!
Good sentiment.
nice work, happy rally!
wonderful ;)
the greatest wonder indeed...
great poem :)
Wonderful Rashmi!
so true, that's right!
Lovely flow and wonderful and true sentiments.
Dear Rashmi
Its very nice and I enjoyed the softness and spirituality of your words...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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nicely done, my friend. Like it
regards
Luke @ WordSalad
i like this
play of words
and ideas
of creating
thx
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