Ownership
I know what you do
and you know what I do
but I don't know why I do
not bothered about my actions.
My actions flows like river
flow is its habit,
so not worried about
just do,do and do.
But I would like to know
what you think now
why you did and how
bothers much as now.
why cant I take it as mine
why don't I think it had flowed
why that anxiousness to assess
why that urge to go ahead ..
Is this human nature
or struggle for survival
but on the run are we
forgetting the values?
Ownership of actions
we all doubt to take
tries to blame others
when our action goes wrong.
Entering this for Jingle's Thursday Poets rally 39.
I would like to thank Jingle for giving me the award and also all the fellow poets who had voted for me for this wonderful award....
Thanks to all of you who have read and commented me ...your comments gives the confidence to write...your visiting and commenting is like the water and fertilizer for me...without that I would never have survived......Thank you again for the encouragement.
24 comments:
I really like your poem.
Another 'human' poem that explores how we all are, insightful and a pleasure to read as always Rashmi ... well done on your award! :o)
Great poem! Accountability is one of the best values...Congratulations!
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love the poem and the cute penguiny hehe.. congrats on the award! my wk 39 is here.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/17/regret/
It is always better to be responsible for one's actions. Lies just bring a foulness that may bite one in the butt eventually! Good poem!
love it.
well deserved award.
Happy Rally.
I like it!! People really need to start taking responsibility for their actions :D
You're speaking the truth
Loved the Poem... Accountability is best human value.. :-)
thanks for reading mine too.
Congrads rashmi dear..
More people should think like you do, taking responsibilities after our own actions might make the world a better place to live. I enjoyed reading this, thanks for linking with Rally. Congrats on the award, well deserved!
taking ownership...it cud be just about any part of ur life, fr ur actions, for things that uve done in past and present..taking ownership for what u believe in ...this was a great write...
good poem taking ownership
Meaningful and real. Good work. :)
Really enjoyed this. Accountability is an important question.
Great poem and great overall blog.
I like the struggling inherent to the acceptance of ones own deeds and the conflict of the unempathetic other.
Keep writing!
Let me know what you think of my recent Jingle submission if your feeling like letters:
https://authorjdhughes.wordpress.com/2011/03/03/snow-on-the-hills-affirm-the-glow-of-frozen-winds/
J. D. Hughes
Great words
oh at times, I don't know why I do what I do too, Rashmi.. nicely expressed :)
Fantastic and astute write on the human affection for not taking what they should as their own
That we have evolved from animals; the theory is becoming profound. Polygamous nature, irresponsibility, competition.. violence, un-necessary feuds..
Very well written Rashmi!
Hugs xx
The images jar, creating a dialogue-- nicely done!
I really like this...a good read.
Congrats on your award!!
Really feel a deep sense of obsession in this piece.
Nicely portrayed.
Keep it up!
A question I have pondered often! Well said!
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