3/10/2011

Poem58. Flying Away

Flying Away

Brooding over something
without knowing
with a blank stare
just standing.

children often finds me
in the balcony
at the kitchen as a doll
just staring.

at times in the middle of
cooking
going away from the way
of daily routine.

flying away unknowing
coming back when disturbed
enjoying this journey
as it goes new ways.

4 comments:

Deborah said...

A brilliant poem Rashmi, really, I loved it!

JAGDISH BALI said...

Nice. Life should be faced as it comes to us.

The Unknowngnome said...

I like it the poem overall and your line "going away from the way" shows great depth. "away unknowning", a great journey. You took me away with this writing, just staring.

Aseem Gaurav Kujur said...

Made me imagine you like a bird, nice pennings!

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