11/25/2012

Poem89.A Step

A Step

Can you hear me? Where are you?" The search for you has been ongoing, echoing through my inner world.

My voice resonates loudly, amidst green valleys and vast mountains of the mind.

Riding on thoughts, I've looked everywhere, yet found only pandemonium.

Confused momentarily, uncertain of what's right or wrong, unable to decide.

Now, taking a step forward, hoping it leads straight to you. Oh God, when will we meet?

8 comments:

Laura said...

oh that feeling of being so lost without breadcrumbs back to the present in a peaceful state of being... so beautifully expressed.

Rashmi said...

@Laura...
it was not for the bread crumbs...
the search was for the GOD...
and the hope of finding him and meeting him..etc..

Claudia said...

smiles..sometimes we're not really sure where to search...but he makes it easy for us to find him...

Brian Miller said...

i feel you in this...feeling at a loss of direction...and maybe on the verge of hope of ever seeing them again....have felt that with God as well, but mostly i find i am never far from him, its only my own stumbling....

Mary said...

Enjoyed this. It has a kind of frantic energy to it, as the search goes on!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Beautiful. I agree with Claudia, for He is everywhere. Lovely, Rashmi.

aelfbee said...

I hope God sees past all our crooked steps and blesses our journey.

Unknown said...

I think you perfectly illustrate the complicated mess we make of seeking, reaching the divine. The process and connection are far simpler than we imagine.