8/10/2010

Poem5. A Miracle

A Miracle

 Words, they come out of me,
in a gush as if rush.
I said sh......!  wait, am busy,
then they stopped and stared.

They had danced in front of me;
before, I wasn't aware.
Now they flow ,flow and flow,
like a river towards sea.

Transformation big that happened,
a  housewife turned poet.
God's miracle may you call this,
lazy turned creative.

Entered for Jingle's Thursday Poet Rally week 31.

For more beautiful poems just go there. 

13 comments:

हेमंत कुमार ♠ Hemant Kumar said...

Hello Rashmi,

Actualy i reached to your blog just for surfing. but i liked it.It,s not only a poetry ---but voice of your heart.
With best wishes.
hemant

Jingle said...

love to see words transform and make positive impact...
beautiful word flow..
very pleasant read.

Jingle said...

Happy Rally,
participant list is your target,
after commenting for 18, let me know...

of course, the more you explore, the more feedback you get.

poem on,
love your contribution here,

Someone Is Special said...

I love your words and the usage in this.. Well done dear..

An Ode to Friendship

Happy Rally

--Someone Is Special--

Bing (PinkLady) said...

those are lovely thoughts creatively crafted into a lovely poem. that's God's gift to you. keep on writing!

A Tranquil Soul

mstevensson said...

I get this feeling when I write sometimes too.. Sometimes the words come faster than I can move my hand. All the best.

lynnaima said...

They sure can be commanding, those words! I like :)

LeiffyV said...

Great piece, I am glad to see that I am not the only one channeling the cosmos through word. Thanks for sharing!

jgrow2 said...

Well done capturing that moment when the spigot gets turned and the words go all over the place!

Kimberly said...

What a great feeling it is.

belladonna23 said...

it really is a beautiful thing, huh? trust me, i know exactly how you feel

Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike) said...

I just love this and not to mention I could relate to what you are expressing.. I wrote a poem of a similar kind of feelings but I have yet published it.. I am so glad you are the 6th on my list as I explored.. :)

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-november-4-10/

how r u?
Letting you know Poets Rally week 32 is on,
Drop me your entry if you wish to be part of it.
Thanks a lot,
Happy November!
xxx