My Mighty Man
With full heart I prayed to God ,
to give a partner friend.
With full love ,back HE replied;
with his choice, my husband.
Yes, he is my Mighty man,
the answer from my God.
But as the roses has thorn;
he has anger around.
With all the anger, swinging moods,
He is there for me,
Knew for sure that God has blessed ,
with His choice for me.
Yet, at times with swinging moods,
I do blame my Lord,
Thorns near so loving flowers,
why you give,my God?
Even though so loving flower,
can’t show your love.
For a moment if you don't care,
thorns will get to you.
Thorns protects from harm the roses,
a natural defense.
May be anger, God’s defense;
8 comments:
nice thoughts... let it flow
I love how you wove the anger and love in the pain and beauty the rose symbolizes! Powerful~
Good metaphor for love and pain....roses and thorns. Also the thorns on roses........the ugly in the beautiful:)
Great point from Ella - a well woven poem.
A strong and honest poem, and your analogy using roses and thorns is a good one.
Rashmi i just love the whole poem and it's brave honesty. It is beautifully written! :-)
Rashmi,
Like Mary and Carrie, I too applaud the honesty within your words.
The example of the rose with flower and thorns was a great idea.
Thank you for sharing your words Rashmi.
Best wishes, Eileen
Good!
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