Happy journey
Chuk chuk, chuk ran my train,
in a rhythm it went forward.
Watching out and just thinking,
a passing time for journey ahead.
Soft green, lush green, dark green,
different types of greenery seen.
Across the bridge we crossed a river
running eager to the sea so near.
in a rhythm it went forward.
Watching out and just thinking,
a passing time for journey ahead.
Soft green, lush green, dark green,
different types of greenery seen.
Across the bridge we crossed a river
running eager to the sea so near.
Buildings,monuments big or small,
stands with their master's pride.
Flowers waved 'hei' to all,
swaying their heads in breeze.
Travelling is a pleasure for me ,
lucky chance to meet unknown.
'Happy journey' wished my dears.
A journey makes me happy dears.
stands with their master's pride.
Flowers waved 'hei' to all,
swaying their heads in breeze.
Travelling is a pleasure for me ,
lucky chance to meet unknown.
'Happy journey' wished my dears.
A journey makes me happy dears.
Entered for Jingles poetry potluck --buildings-landmarks-and monuments
6 comments:
my dearest poet friend,
how cute to see your poem starting with a chuck chuck chuck,
I used to ride trains a lot,
love the sound and your poem makes beautiful rhymes or rhythms to match it...
way to go..
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-sister-lives-too-far-away/
here is one of my entries,
a poetry award 4 you and thank you for your support on week 9 potluck fun.
Enjoy!
xxx
haha nice!
Liked it.. my childhood went near a railway line and have travelled a lot in trains.. always enjoyed..
Thanks for a lovely poem.. came through Poetry Potluck..
travel is fun-- you captured that well.
Nice one Rashmi. I just love trains. Always keep travelling by them...
I love train travel. You captured the joy of it beautifully.
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