2/23/2011

Poem52.A Puzzle

  A Puzzle


What,you expect from life?
the question reverberate
tried to avoid it safe
but no ,can't escape .

the basic necessities
or the comforts
is it peace of mind
or the love you want.

confusion rises high
can't decide what
everything seem necessary
as a mixture it seems

each of these are like
pieces of a puzzle
place it in exact
the picture, then complete .

Will the life be worthwhile
if some of them you don't have
Success life is a combination
of comforts,peace and love.

Written for  Magpietales where picture is given as prompt.

9 comments:

JAGDISH BALI said...

Of course man has to order the things acccording to priority.

Deborah said...

Another wonderful poem Rashmi :o)

gautami tripathy said...

Good one!

scattered with the wind

Tess Kincaid said...

Very nice!

kenny said...

This is super...very nice indeed. Putting together pieces of a successful life.

Susannah said...

Lovely Magpie Rashmi. :-)

Kavita said...

Oh yes...very well said, Rashmi...
It's like Maslow's hierarchy of needs... first the basic necessities, then the luxuries, and then above all, peace of mind...

I guess if we put it all in order, life will begin to make sense... (or so we hope :))

I really liked your magpie, R..
(hugs)

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

flying thoughts, love the imagery.

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