A Puzzle
What,you expect from life?
the question reverberate
tried to avoid it safe
but no ,can't escape .
the basic necessities
or the comforts
is it peace of mind
or the love you want.
confusion rises high
can't decide what
everything seem necessary
as a mixture it seems
the question reverberate
tried to avoid it safe
but no ,can't escape .
the basic necessities
or the comforts
is it peace of mind
or the love you want.
confusion rises high
can't decide what
everything seem necessary
as a mixture it seems
each of these are like
pieces of a puzzle
place it in exact
the picture, then complete .
Will the life be worthwhile
if some of them you don't have
Success life is a combination
of comforts,peace and love.
Written for Magpietales where picture is given as prompt.
pieces of a puzzle
place it in exact
the picture, then complete .
Will the life be worthwhile
if some of them you don't have
Success life is a combination
of comforts,peace and love.
Written for Magpietales where picture is given as prompt.
9 comments:
Of course man has to order the things acccording to priority.
Another wonderful poem Rashmi :o)
Good one!
scattered with the wind
Very nice!
This is super...very nice indeed. Putting together pieces of a successful life.
Lovely Magpie Rashmi. :-)
Oh yes...very well said, Rashmi...
It's like Maslow's hierarchy of needs... first the basic necessities, then the luxuries, and then above all, peace of mind...
I guess if we put it all in order, life will begin to make sense... (or so we hope :))
I really liked your magpie, R..
(hugs)
flying thoughts, love the imagery.
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