8/23/2011

Poem 67.Oh! dear words

Poem 67.Oh! Dear words

Words ,dancing around
one moment comes in front
Tries to capture, they vanish
ha,playing hide and seek?

before ,they were in order
but now  irregular
might be mad with me
for being not attentive.

dear ones,dont be angry
was busy and tired
wanted to play with you
but was not able to.

oh! dear words
you are my happiness
my way of talking and
touching  the, dear GOD.

11 comments:

Deborah said...

What a joy to read!
You can feel the joy in every line ... wonderful Rashmi!!
So glad you're back x

The Unknowngnome said...

A true poet, a true child of God knows the joy you display here.

Beautiful.

The Gooseberry Garden said...

inspiriting words, well done.

mairmusic said...

Sweet, funny lament for writer's block-- nicely done!

http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/2011/08/17/week-149-too-much-sadness-fills-a-room-displacing/

Morning said...

delightful read...

thanks for sharing.

charleslmashburn said...

I love it! Such a playful game f hide and seek with elusive words.

My offering for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/this-eden/

Rek said...

words that resonate with many of us...presented in a delightfully way.

haikulovesongs said...

delightful! and so true~if we can't play with them when first they appear, they often hide! ♥

Munir said...

True innocense, words sometimes seem like they have life and that they are our true companions don't they?

Susannah said...

I am glad your managed to capture these dancing words Rashmi! :-)

A lovely poem.

bajanpoet said...

I loved this poem! Made me smile - the playfulness of the words, being angry coz you couldn't play with them - reminds me of my children :)

Awesome piece :D