Poem 67.Oh! Dear words
Words ,dancing around
one moment comes in front
Tries to capture, they vanish
ha,playing hide and seek?
before ,they were in order
but now irregular
might be mad with me
for being not attentive.
dear ones,dont be angry
was busy and tired
wanted to play with you
but was not able to.
oh! dear words
you are my happiness
my way of talking and
touching the, dear GOD.
11 comments:
What a joy to read!
You can feel the joy in every line ... wonderful Rashmi!!
So glad you're back x
A true poet, a true child of God knows the joy you display here.
Beautiful.
inspiriting words, well done.
Sweet, funny lament for writer's block-- nicely done!
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/2011/08/17/week-149-too-much-sadness-fills-a-room-displacing/
delightful read...
thanks for sharing.
I love it! Such a playful game f hide and seek with elusive words.
My offering for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/this-eden/
words that resonate with many of us...presented in a delightfully way.
delightful! and so true~if we can't play with them when first they appear, they often hide! ♥
True innocense, words sometimes seem like they have life and that they are our true companions don't they?
I am glad your managed to capture these dancing words Rashmi! :-)
A lovely poem.
I loved this poem! Made me smile - the playfulness of the words, being angry coz you couldn't play with them - reminds me of my children :)
Awesome piece :D
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