9/10/2011

Poem 70.Fire of Dreams

Fire of Dreams

Conflicts between what am
what wanted to be
always  back in mind.
At times it reaches that point
where you burn yourself
with inferiority
but sits idle
feeling helpless 
day dreaming 
just allowing self
to get ruined in the fire of dreams.
Is it fair to yourself?
Why and why can't I find the courage
from the fire to leap forward
reach the goal or atleast try?
Dreams should give you power
to aim, shoot and reach your goal.
Or you will be like a volcano
always ready to erupt........

18 comments:

The Unknowngnome said...

Well said!

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

nice one...

the last four lines are awesome! Love this!

JJRod'z

Kay L. Davies said...

Very well done.
— K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

Jo Bryant said...

great thoughts

Tumblewords: said...

Well said...

Isabel Doyle said...

well done

Brian Miller said...

nice...the inferiority and putting oneself down def keeps us from dreams...and can be tough to overcome, but it can...

Jo Bryant said...

Many great lines in this - many

Deborah said...

Wonderfully written and I just love the last two lines!

Reflections said...

Fabulous! great message burns within this piece.

Tess Kincaid said...

Excellent.

Bijaylaxmi said...

Lovely....

The Gooseberry Garden said...

love the title, a tale well done.

The Gooseberry Garden said...

Hohoho,

What charming poetry you have posted here.

Invite you to share 1 to 3 poems with us, anything could fit the theme of object,

Cheers.
Hope to see you in.

Happy Writing..
xoxox

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Kalyan said...

lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

Tarang Sinha said...

This is beautiful and thought provoking:)

mytreelife said...

Love this poem so much! Speaks to me in so many ways