Fire of Dreams
Conflicts between what am
what wanted to be
always back in mind.
At times it reaches that point
where you burn yourself
with inferiority
but sits idle
feeling helpless
day dreaming
day dreaming
just allowing self
to get ruined in the fire of dreams.
Is it fair to yourself?
Why and why can't I find the courage
from the fire to leap forward
reach the goal or atleast try?
Dreams should give you power
to aim, shoot and reach your goal.
Or you will be like a volcano
always ready to erupt........
17 comments:
Well said!
nice one...
the last four lines are awesome! Love this!
JJRod'z
Very well done.
— K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
great thoughts
Well said...
well done
nice...the inferiority and putting oneself down def keeps us from dreams...and can be tough to overcome, but it can...
Many great lines in this - many
Wonderfully written and I just love the last two lines!
Fabulous! great message burns within this piece.
Excellent.
love the title, a tale well done.
Hohoho,
What charming poetry you have posted here.
Invite you to share 1 to 3 poems with us, anything could fit the theme of object,
Cheers.
Hope to see you in.
Happy Writing..
xoxox
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lovely words...nicely crafted lines!
This is beautiful and thought provoking:)
Love this poem so much! Speaks to me in so many ways
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