In my last poem I have prayed to dear God to run antivirus on me....He instantly answered to my request and was hospitalised and done a full scan on me.....Just today came out clean....Oh GOD....You are great......
Really God has made me clean,clean my mind eyes ears everything...
Now I can hear the world in its true beauty. Hear the music..see all of you and more over be happy to be alive ...................
Had prayed to god
for cleaning with antivirus
never thought will grace soon
just the next day morn.
Then ,
lying down in the hospital bed
closing eyes and watching
I can see dear words
with wonderful dresses
floating towards me.
They danced before me
called me to wake up
made me sure write.
Compelled, took a book
a pen was ready,then
they went behind a curtain.
Now if lie down, sure
will start calling again.........
17 comments:
Oh Rashmi, I'm so glad! Sometimes it takes something as drastic as that to realise life really IS worth living (I've been there too) It seems God took you that far so you could live again!!! I'm so happy you're okay and I'm so happy you're happy!!! :o)
Yes,Deborah...I am happy to be alive...
It is so good to see you writing again Rashmi. And I am so glad that you are feeling better. xxx
What a wonderful write. This is a wonderful post and I share your newfound excitement for life. Write more. It's obviously why you're hear!
Perhaps you might relate to my entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/blood-on-the-moon-2/
God is great indeed! We all celebrate your joy and thanksgiving of good health and life.
"I can see dear words
with wonderful dresses
floating towards me."
You have been given a gift.
So sorry to hear you were not feeling well but I am also glad to see you are feeling better and writing again. happy rally week and hope your continue to feel better
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Your words are so dear! I am happy to hear that your antivirus scan has been completed! God bless you my friend.
Hello Rashmi.
Life can be challenging at times, especially when we are unwell, but life can also bring us much happiness, laughter and of course love.
I'm so glad you are feeling better & have found a new appreciation for life. Embrace it with all your might and continue to write.
Remember, you are not alone. There are many friends right here in blogland when/if you need a listening ear.
Best wishes to you.
Under Blinking Stars
count your blessings.
well fine tuned entry.
Especially loved the experimentation with grammar in the last stanza! Cool!
I am brand new to the Poet's Rally, but your poem was an inspiration. Life is indeed a gift. Feel free to visit my contribution at Lolarati.
we need to believe that God is the Greatest and He loves His people and listens and answers the prayers -thank you for sharing your experience in such touching words
great tips and insights.
You’ve got superb talent in creative writing,
Keep it up.
Please check out short story slam week 10 prompt today.
It is great to write and entertain our children,
Don’t you agree?
Give it a try,
Let your beautiful imagination fly.
Best.
Happy Autumn!
xoxox
Glad you are well. God is great and loving.
Loved your poem too. Thanks for sharing.
~Len.
Oh I am so happy you discovered life is beautiful. It truly is, the planet so beautiful to look at, nature so wonderful. Even with all the crap going on, humans still rise up and are magnificent and selfless. I love your poem affirming life.........there is a quote that says something like "The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeing new landscapes, but in having new eyes. You have your new eyes now. Get prepared to be blown away!!!!:)
Rashmi, I am happy you are alive too and see my younger self in your journey of questions and pain. A secret us wise old crones know: it is okay just to Be. You ARE brave, because each day you get up and put one foot in front of the other. You ARE on your journey, it sometimes feels like a slow one, while you are learning so much. But towards the end it speeds up, so enjoy the slow pace while you can. :) Always remember: because you ARE, you are worthy. Just to live, is a blessing. Beauty is all around.
Namaste.
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