Poem69.Oh GOD....You are great...

In my last poem I have prayed to dear God to run antivirus on me....He instantly answered to my request and was hospitalised and done a full scan on me.....Just today came out clean....Oh GOD....You are great......
Really God has made me clean,clean my mind eyes ears everything...
Now I can hear the world in its true beauty. Hear the music..see all of you and more over be happy to be alive ...................

Had prayed to god
for cleaning with antivirus
never thought will grace soon
just the next day morn.

Then ,
 lying down in the hospital bed
closing eyes and watching
I can see dear words
with wonderful dresses
floating towards me.
They danced before me
called me to wake up
made me sure write.

Compelled, took a book
a pen  was ready,then
they went behind a curtain.
Now if lie down, sure
will start calling again.........


Deborah said...

Oh Rashmi, I'm so glad! Sometimes it takes something as drastic as that to realise life really IS worth living (I've been there too) It seems God took you that far so you could live again!!! I'm so happy you're okay and I'm so happy you're happy!!! :o)

Rashmi said...

Yes,Deborah...I am happy to be alive...

Susannah said...

It is so good to see you writing again Rashmi. And I am so glad that you are feeling better. xxx

Anonymous said...

What a wonderful write. This is a wonderful post and I share your newfound excitement for life. Write more. It's obviously why you're hear!

Perhaps you might relate to my entry: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/blood-on-the-moon-2/

The Unknowngnome said...

God is great indeed! We all celebrate your joy and thanksgiving of good health and life.

"I can see dear words
with wonderful dresses
floating towards me."

You have been given a gift.

Ann LeFlore said...

So sorry to hear you were not feeling well but I am also glad to see you are feeling better and writing again. happy rally week and hope your continue to feel better

Anonymous said...

Your words are so dear! I am happy to hear that your antivirus scan has been completed! God bless you my friend.

Andy said...

Hello Rashmi.
Life can be challenging at times, especially when we are unwell, but life can also bring us much happiness, laughter and of course love.

I'm so glad you are feeling better & have found a new appreciation for life. Embrace it with all your might and continue to write.

Remember, you are not alone. There are many friends right here in blogland when/if you need a listening ear.

Best wishes to you.

Under Blinking Stars

Morning said...

count your blessings.

well fine tuned entry.

Anonymous said...

Especially loved the experimentation with grammar in the last stanza! Cool!

Lola said...

I am brand new to the Poet's Rally, but your poem was an inspiration. Life is indeed a gift. Feel free to visit my contribution at Lolarati.

anjum artwriter said...

we need to believe that God is the Greatest and He loves His people and listens and answers the prayers -thank you for sharing your experience in such touching words

Bluebell Books said...

great tips and insights.

Bluebell Books said...

You’ve got superb talent in creative writing,
Keep it up.

Please check out short story slam week 10 prompt today.

It is great to write and entertain our children,
Don’t you agree?

Give it a try,
Let your beautiful imagination fly.

Happy Autumn!

Len Kamei said...

Glad you are well. God is great and loving.

Loved your poem too. Thanks for sharing.


Sherry Blue Sky said...

Oh I am so happy you discovered life is beautiful. It truly is, the planet so beautiful to look at, nature so wonderful. Even with all the crap going on, humans still rise up and are magnificent and selfless. I love your poem affirming life.........there is a quote that says something like "The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeing new landscapes, but in having new eyes. You have your new eyes now. Get prepared to be blown away!!!!:)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Rashmi, I am happy you are alive too and see my younger self in your journey of questions and pain. A secret us wise old crones know: it is okay just to Be. You ARE brave, because each day you get up and put one foot in front of the other. You ARE on your journey, it sometimes feels like a slow one, while you are learning so much. But towards the end it speeds up, so enjoy the slow pace while you can. :) Always remember: because you ARE, you are worthy. Just to live, is a blessing. Beauty is all around.