Happy To Call It A Dream
Walking, walking,
dreamily , calmly,
just going,
aimlessly.
Deserted area,
nearby calm sea,
wind blowing,
just walking.
Speeding cycle,
suddenly she saw,
at a distance,
and wished to call.
Thunder sudden;
made her turn,
what she saw,
made her churn.
The sea was rising,
eating the land,
eagerly coming,
to take her hand.
Wanted to shout,
no voice came out,
death, the thought,
strike her just.
Suffocation
lack of air
lack of air
Struggling
Deep blackness.
Sudden shaking ,
heard him ask
"what happened"
realized, not dead.
Touch by hands of death,
shook me inside out,
Spared out this time;
so, happy to call it a dream.
Remembering the beautiful words of Robert Frost
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep. "
Entering for Magpietales "Mag 91" where we have to write a poem or short vignette using the picture featured as your inspiration.
10 comments:
Heaven has left a new comment on your post "Poem73.Happy To Call It A Dream":
This is beautiful written.. I like that it's only a dream
Sherry Blue Sky has left a new comment on your post "Poem73.Happy To Call It A Dream":
I love your header photo, too - spectacular. This poem really grabbed me.......from peace to turmoil, crisis, then relief. Wow.
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Templeton's fury has left a new comment on your post "Poem73.Happy To Call It A Dream":
i enjoyed the mood change from the beginning to the end. well done. (and i love the frost quote, too!)
Paulo Guimaraes has left a new comment on your post "Poem73.Happy To Call It A Dream":
Wonderful imagery! I could feel the sinking into the blackness!
Caty has left a new comment on your post "Poem73.Happy To Call It A Dream":
what a dream. I love your header photo...it's gorgeous :)
Deborah has left a new comment on your post "Poem73.Happy To Call It A Dream":
Wonderful Poem Rashmi and some wonderful lines there ... and I LOVE the new header! :o)
JJ Roa Rodriguez has left a new comment on your post "Poem73.Happy To Call It A Dream":
beautiful post. and the header pic, it's gorgeous!
JJRod'z
Brian Miller has left a new comment on your post "Poem73.Happy To Call It A Dream":
wow. very nice imagery and that is quite the dream you know...smiles...
Dave King has left a new comment on your post "Poem73.Happy To Call It A Dream":
Exactly what a dream should be like. A dream of a dream!
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