A Battle Field
Read or write
sit or stand
do it right
or stand blurred.
Wish or don't
seconds run by
minutes move so
and days goes by.
Off and on
in and out
hospital ,home
travel a lot.
Like a bee
for nectar
visits medics
for the cure.
Allergy, they say
simple ,it seems
suffer irritation
how to explain?
Continuous
battle for breath
struggle to carry
yourself as normal.
Day or night
me,a battle field
where 'will' fights
with circumstances.
Fighting with all my might
who will win let us watch
I won't fail, I am sure
for strong mind, I do have.
Fighting with all my might
who will win let us watch
I won't fail, I am sure
for strong mind, I do have.
10 comments:
Hi all,
Sorry I don't know what happened to all the comments you made on the Battle field and the next poem...
When I try to publish the comments it is telling me "the comment is expired".
Anyway I am putting a copy here of those in my mail.....If I have left anybody's comment please forgive...
I value each of you and your words are so dear to me...
Thank you all for encouraging me by your comments........
Rohit has left a new comment on your post "Poem74.A Battle Field":
just stumbled upon on ur blog.good one.
nice poem of optimism..keep fighting.
Have a look at mine's similar composition on similar theme
http://floating-expressions.blogspot.com/2011/11/i-love-failure_5016.html
The Cello Strings has left a new comment on your post "Poem74.A Battle Field":
you can win if you fight hard enough.
Cheers.
dakshi has left a new comment on your post "Poem74.A Battle Field":
Lovely.. just loved it... :)
poeformology (http://poeformology.wordpress.com/) has left a new comment on your post "Poem74.A Battle Field":
It has quite an "epic" feel to it. Wonderful. :)
The Unknowngnome has left a new comment on your post "Poem74.A Battle Field":
Win or lose we will watch.
moonscribbles (http://moonscribbles.wordpress.com/) has left a new comment on your post "Poem74.A Battle Field":
life is a battlefield....we must keep on fighting if we want to live.....
nice poem, keep fighting.....
lynnaima (http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/) has left a new comment on your post "Poem74.A Battle Field":
a nice read, filled with courage and hope! enjoy the rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/02/faces-and-shadows/
ccchampagne (http://ccchampagne.wordpress.com/) has left a new comment on your post "Poem74.A Battle Field":
Keeping it simple: I like! *smile*
tasithoughts (http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/) has left a new comment on your post "Poem74.A Battle Field":
Love the determination.
JP
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